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    Screenwriting Tips: Scene Checklist Part 3
    • Jun 30, 2020
    • 4 min

    Screenwriting Tips: Scene Checklist Part 3

    In this final instalment of my Scene Checklist series (see Part 1 and Part 2), I want to talk about goals, and the strategies and tactics characters use to achieve them in a scene. First, let's examine our terms. A better understanding of them will help your screenwriting in many ways, so it's worth taking the time. GOAL - that clear, concise, easily-recognisable finish line your character thinks they need to cross to achieve what they want. STRATEGY - the holistic plan, seen
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    5 Projects, 5 Producers!
    • Jun 17, 2019
    • 2 min

    5 Projects, 5 Producers!

    Every screenwriter knows how hard it is to get attention for your own work, let alone finding someone willing to pay you to write for them. That's why I feel fortunate to have producers attached to the projects I've written or was hired to write, who are out there fighting the good fight to get them made. Here's a quick look at some of the exciting projects I've got cooking right now. FIVE PROJECTS IN DEVELOPMENT 1. THE THIRD BOMB This is my baby, my spec screenplay, THE THIR
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    Looking Forward To The Downton Abbey Movie?
    • May 29, 2019
    • 2 min

    Looking Forward To The Downton Abbey Movie?

    I love that trailer for the Downton Abbey movie. The editing, the music, the choices of dialogue - it all combines to press the right emotional buttons for fans of the original show. Strangely enough, though, when I was making promos for TV shows like Downton Abbey at BBC Worldwide (now BBC Studios), I wasn't a huge fan. Perhaps that's because I was forced to watch it. I mean really watch it, and analyse it, so I could figure out how to best promote it on TV. Overcoming my ow
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    "A WWII Script Unlike Any!"
    • Feb 18, 2019
    • 2 min

    "A WWII Script Unlike Any!"

    Since finishing the first draft of a paid writing assignment for a producer here in Australia, the feedback on the script has been tremendous. (phew!) "None to our surprise Phil delivered an incredible screenplay. Looking forward to our next collaboration!" - Elliott Yancey, Producer Feedback from The Black List We also got some tremendous feedback on the screenplay from an exclusive reader at The Black List: “These women are inspirational characters rarely seen on the big sc
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