Helping Turn Good Into Great
If you find yourself stuck with a screenplay that isn’t quite working, despite having gotten feedback from others, you need a script consultant like Phil. He's read and analyzed scripts for The Script Doctor, Cinergi, Hallmark, Roland Joffe (The Mission) and countless indie producers and screenwriters.
MORE ABOUT PHIL
Phil's first screenplay was optioned by a BAFTA-winning producer. He currently has an animated feature film in production. He also has three different scripts he was hired to write being developed and packaged by producers.
"Witty, thoughtful, and fresh. Phil Parker is the real deal. If you get the chance to work with him, you better take it."
Adam J Pitzler
"This man knows his way with words. Phil's a story-teller, tale spinner, with a knack for uncovering the subtext. And he relays his feedback with heart. I look forward to our next discussion."
"Phil Parker @storiesbyphil is a brilliant screenwriter who gave me excellent notes on a script, and he was voted into the ISA Top 25 screenwriters to watch!"
"Phil's feedback on our kung fu action script was excellent. Not only does he know how to identify problem areas, but he also had brilliant suggestions for how to fix them. Yolanda and I were so impressed we wanted to hire him to rewrite it for us!"
THE RIGHT KIND OF FEEDBACK
Diagnosing what ails your current draft starts with examining your concept. Is it solid? Does it get people excited when they hear it? If so, and your screenplay still isn’t satisfying readers, then Phil can help find the weak spots.
He will break down and examine its plot, characters, dialogue, theme, and pacing and provide examples of what's not working and possible ways to fix it.
Want to hire a script consultant but wondering how much it will cost? Prices for Phil's services vary depending on what you need. Feel free to check out his list of script consulting services below to see which one is right for you then contact him for a free quite.