FLY GIRLS, the "rip-roaring" action & adventure screenplay Phil Parker was hired to write, continues to garner great reviews from industry sources!
Draft One Sets High Bar!
The initial draft Phil delivered earned a hard-to-get score of '8' from an EXCLUSIVE reader at The Black List!
...who also had this to say about it:
"There are several key roles that any actress would jump at the chance to play. The main character is drawn with depth, nuance and authenticity, and features in a stunning manner that gives her role the potential to entice top leading ladies.
The aviation scenes are riveting, rendered with richly immersive authenticity and spectacularly cinematic detail. The final sequence makes for a thrilling third act climax that ought to thoroughly satisfy moviegoers."
And, even more importantly, was feedback from the producer who hired me:
"None to our surprise Phil delivered an incredible screenplay. Looking forward to our next collaboration!" - Elliott Yancey, producer
Draft Three Soars Even Higher
With a BAFTA-winning producer coming on board the team, notes were given, new drafts were done, and now - new reviews are in!
"It's hard not to give this script a 10 out of 10 in every category ...
An outstanding job ...a story filled with dramatic conflict and emotional tension."
- reader #1 analysis.
"I was really engaged not just with the story itself, but the way you have told it. You should be proud of the work you have done here. This really feels like something that should be made and would make quite a splash if it was -- good job!"
- reader #2 analysis.
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